Drip Drop Drip Drop
the rain falls from the sky
each drop falling individually
so pure an clear
it’s hard to be tense when it rains
each drip and each drop make a different sound on your roof
the rain falls from the sky
each drop falling individually
so pure an clear
it’s hard to be tense when it rains
each drip and each drop make a different sound on your roof
Don't be so hard on yourself! It was really good, the ending was the best part though....
ReplyDeleteWow this is really good! Keep working at it. In the fourth line I think you forgot the d in and though. Overall it was awesome!
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